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Copper Rose

Fiction horse story by Julia Evans, age 12


The copper mare tossed her silky mane and pranced proudly at the end of the lead rope, the sun making her rounded, plump belly glisten. No inexperienced onlooker would notice the nervous sweet that drenched her coat, or the whites showing in her eyes that signaled discomfort.

"What do you think, Harry?" the groom, Pete Anderson, who walked her asked the old man with the gray beard who watched her pass by with his critical blue eyes.

"I think everything's set," the old man replied in a raspy, crackling voice that only hinted at his age. He gave the skittish mare a pat on the rump with the gnarled hand of an experienced yet arthritic horseman. "Bed her down nice for tonight, but don't keep too close an eye on her. You know how crazy she gets at times like these, and when it comes to foals she's an old expert. Yeah, I think she'll be just fine."

THREE YEARS LATER

The copper filly pranced at the end of her lead rope, finely etched head held high and muscles rippling smoothly beneath her coat. Terri Winters gazed fondly at the three-year-old Thoroughbred she had helped to train, groom, and exercise ride along with her ex-jockey grandfather, Harry Winters. They had named the filly Copper Rose, for her coat resembled a brand new sparkling penny and both Harry and his granddaughter knew at the moment of Rose's birth that she would stand where she stood today... at the Run for the Roses, one of the greatest days in racing, the Kentucky Derby.

Twelve-year-old Terri hugged the prancing filly, who had just clocked a magnificent breeze earlier in the morning that had certainly turned some heads. "Just wait until they really see you win," Terri whispered. Rose snorted in agreement as her jockey and former groom, Pete Anderson, mounted up. People gasped and murmured with amazement as Rose, the only real longshot at 30-1 despite her perfect track record, made the colts in the field look like lead ponies and danced on her toes with her ears pricked. Only one colt stood to rival her, and he was her half-brother out of the same stallion; a big, burly bay of somewhat similar build called Moonshadow. Her grandfather had sold him at Keeneland long ago. Since then the colt had clawed his way up among the best, and now he pranced confidently at the Kentucky Derby walking ring, preparing to run against Rose. For the first time, Terri's infamous pre-race jitters came in a startling wave. Luckily, Copper Rose was taken by a lead pony to go forth in the post-parade before the filly could pick up on her groom's nervousness.

"Good luck, Rose!" she called after her horse and friend. "I know you're going to win. I just know it."

Terri barely realized how she got to the grandstand to stand beside her grandfather; she knew only that in her heart she was down there with her filly and the jockey as they loaded calmly into the gate.

Suddenly the gate flew open and the air around the track rang with the beats of thunderous hooves. Terri's heart sank as she heard the announcer cry, "It looks like Copper Rose has been bumped by another horse out of the gate. She's recovered her stride, but it doesn't look like she's going to catch the pack today. Rotten luck." Terri lost herself in the announcer's excited voice. "Moonshadow has the lead and he's not letting go. Battling for position just behind him are Georgia Storm and Frontrunner. Then there's Dashboard Dice tucked in just behind in third. They hold onto their positions! Nobody's moving! They're headed for the Clubhouse Turn... Wait! What's this?! Copper Rose, the longshot filly, is ROARING up on the outside! The others might as well be standing still! She's taken Top Dollar... she's passing Dawn's Hill... she's flying past Dashboard Dice and the two horses jostling for second... the filly and Moonshadow are neck-and-neck while the rest of the field is left behind! But Copper Rose is all burned out... she's dropping back and leaving the field to Moonshadow. But wait... The filly's got something left! She's picking up! She's next to Moonshadow... she's passed him! This filly is running away! She's ahead by one... no, two... no, three... no, four. Yes! The longshot filly, Copper Rose, has taken home the Derby by four lengths!"

Terri leaped from her seat with a shriek of joy and prepared to head for the winner's circle. That was when the crowd fell silent. "Wait! Something's gone wrong with Copper Rose!" the announcer called out. "She's past the finish line, but the filly's down. This race was too much... she gave everything she had."

Terri felt as if her heart had stopped beating. How could this have happened? The rest of the evening was a miserable blur as the filly was handed over to the vets who would "do everything they could to save her life", as she was driven home by her grimly silent uncle, and as she curled up in bed to cry and remember her Copper Rose. In the middle of the night her grandfather received a call, and she listened hopefully. Her hopes fell as she heard, "Yes? Oh... Oh, I see... Thank you."

Terri cried herself to sleep.

In the morning, her grandfather woke her up early. "Come on. There's something you need to see." Terri was thrilled to behold the spectacle just outside... A copper chestnut filly standing tall, only slightly skinnier than before. "She'll never race again," Harry Winters told her as she wrapped her arms around the filly's neck. She didn't hear. She was too busy telling Copper Rose, "I told you that you were going to win. I just knew it." Rose snorted with agreement.

 


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